First Chapter Critique Workshop with Jed Herne (for fantasy writers)
Join me in this live critique workshop where I'll help you improve the first chapter of your fantasy novel.
After editing novels for over 30 fantasy writers, along with publishing four novels of my own, I’ve spent a lot of time trying to craft the best opening chapters possible.
I've had writers pay me $1000s to help them improve their first chapters in my 1-on-1 Story Coaching program (with some clients paying up to $6000 or $7000 for me to edit their entire novel).
"From the very first time I got a critique from Jed, my brain was on fire with how much there was to think about, and it filled me with passion to keep writing and keep improving. Jed is a phenomenal writer and teacher." - Trevor Gjeltema
In this live workshop, you can submit your first chapter to me.
Then, I’ll pick three writers' chapters to critique and improve live in the session.
(Note: if you just want to watch, and you don't want to submit a first chapter, you can do that as well.)
As we go through this, you’ll learn the principles behind how to:
1) Craft unique character voices.
2) Describe your characters in a compelling way.
3) Hook readers immediately so they have no choice but to binge through your entire novel.
... and a whole lot more!
There will also be time for Q&A in the workshop. If you've been wanting to ask me a question about your novel, this is your chance.
You will also receive a recording of the workshop within 24 hours after it finishes.
Spots are limited (ticket sales will close once we fill up my Zoom account's capacity), so grab your ticket now, and I'll see you soon!
- Jed Herne
This workshop runs from 8am-10am on June 30th, Perth time.
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